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Tuesday, 21 November 2017

Never lie

W.A.L.T do a story about a time we lied or got framed this took a wile to think of but it was really nice to do and i think that i lurt my lesson


                             Never lie

I am going to tell you about a time i lied to my dad and how i turned out let's say that it wasn't the turnout i expected.


It was sunday and we had gone to the pool with my dad and sam.
I had a craving for the lollys i ate them all…
and hit my head on a tree branch dad was cumming quickly and he looked hungry so i quickly went into the pool...
dad was angry he said with anger “who ate all the lollys”...
i froze with fear and hade to think of something quick “umm sam did it i tried to stop him but he hit me and that is how i got this bump…

Dads face started to go as red as a tomato in fire “samm”...
oh he is so angry  well at least he didn't catch me doing it “you are ground for a year and no phone”...

“Wait what is this”...


Naiema” oh  what i didn't know is sam vido me eating all the lollys so i was ground and i had to do sam's and my chores for two weeks…

It was really hard to do the chores and so i learnt my lesson never lie again.

2 comments:

  1. Hi Naiema,
    I liked your story about when you lied and that you should learn NOT to lie. I love how you described your dad's emotions that he's face was red like a tomato. Maybe next time you should check your spelling mistakes and punctuation's so it makes sense.

    Well done ;)
    Eden

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  2. hello Eden thank you for the comment and yes i will check my spelling i have been protracting my words at home 25 words a night and i am getting better

    Naiema

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