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Friday 3 February 2017

All about me !

Hi i am Naiema and this is my first ever post .I hope you enjoy.

7 comments:

  1. Hi Naiema, you did tell me who you are in this slide show. Please do not be offended but the black text on your piano background was really hard to read. Maybe next time you could use less slides and just put more on them. Nice work though. Bye.

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  2. Hi Naiema,
    I liked the way to tell us about yourself,maybe next time you should change the colour and some of the words are wrong.

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  3. Hi Naiema, maybe next time you could change the background because it was really hard for me to read it.

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  4. Hi Naiema,
    I like how you added a good amount of information. Maybe next tie, could you make your writing a little more visual, and add more images.

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  5. Hi Naiema next time can you change the background and next time can you check the spelling and look over your work next time.

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  6. Hi Naiema
    I like the way you explain about yourself. Probably next time check your spelling because it's not right and can you change your background because it's hard to read.

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  7. Hi Naiema,
    maybe next time you could check your spelling. Also I liked how you explained about your self.

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