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Wednesday 5 September 2018

Phones should not be band from school

W.A.L.T To Write a Persuasive text ,
I learnt that 80% of people are bulled online
What i did well all of my facts
What i need to work on my spelling


I believe that phones should not be banned at school…
To me in my own statement, I strongly believe that phones can be used for school purposes and to help us kids with work don't believe me well I prepared fore facts for you today.

1 To learn more on how to cyber safe did you know that 80% of teen are bullied on their phones and on a computer that can delete the message, yes I know it's never fully dilated but teachers can see but on phones they can't we can't just walk into class and say ‘HEY I'M BEING BULLIED’ and a teacher says show me but you aren't allowed your phone so you don't have proof.
2 .We can find apps that help with our learning because we can't download because they block it and if we found an app that would really help us don't teachers say find this that can really help you but we can't download them on our computers so we need our phones.
3. It is proven that music help calm your nerves down and help us concentrate much better but yes we can use youtube but we can't listen to our type of music we download our music onto our phones so we can just listen to that instead.
4. To take notes if we had our phones we could record the teacher talking so we could take notes and if we missed something important that we could listen to it later and we have all examples right there but we can record voices and work on our computer can we no and we can listen at our own  speed.

If a child is found in the wrong using their phone for the wrong purpose the teacher may take it away
For kids like me who have breakdowns and need to tell there mum & dad then phones are the  best way to tell them instead of going up in front of the class to talk to the teacher

But also having phones can come in handy
Our mum’s dad’s all ways tell us if what goes around comes around so if we are naughty on our phones then their phone is taken away for a five minutes. It can also teach responsibility everything is around technology and we will do work on a test they must give their phones or keep it on there desk shut down.

rules
1 On silent.
2 In sight so teacher can see your phone at all times.
3 do not go phone while in class unless for research purpose or help with work.
4 Use only at playtime and after school.

This was my reasons on why i think phones should not be banned.if you wont us to be more responsibil let us have phones.  

2 comments:

  1. hay Naiema,
    It is Kurtis and i just wanna say great work on your structure. Next time i think you can work on your gramma, putting in full stops and after a full stop a capital letter. Anyway keep up the writing.

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  2. Well done Naiema, I can see that you have worked very hard on this. You have a great opening statement the clearly states your position on the topic. I did not know that 80% of teens are bullied on their phones or computers. Maybe next time you could look at using words to link your paragraphs together.

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