Over the spand of two week's in term 4 Room 6 have have been use the langue fetcher of show not tell we need to pick one emotion and write abut it and tell you the felling but to telling you what it is, please tell me what emotion you got from this text.
How did I end up on this far away hill so far that no one can see or hear me.
The diffirent person sits at the back of the school were no one gose in hope someone will notice a girl longing for a friend she sits at the back of the class when she puts her hand up to answer no one sees her and she fells invisabill.
The diffirent person sits at the back of the school were no one gose in hope someone will notice a girl longing for a friend she sits at the back of the class when she puts her hand up to answer no one sees her and she fells invisabill.
Hi Naiema,
ReplyDeleteDannah here...you've done a great work but next time you should put more informations on it on how you feel that emotion so that we know about how you feel that emotion, maybe next time check your spellings so that readers can understand it more..
Well done Naiema! Keep up the good work...
Dannah:)